There are four seasons in a year . They‘re spring, summer, fall and winter. Do you know my favourite season? I like all of them .

Spring is green. The weather gets warmer and warmer. The trees and grass turn green and the flowers bloom. Summer is red. Why? Because the summer sun is hot. The cicadas sing loudly and the butterflies dance beautifully. Fall is golden. It’s a harvest time. We can have lots of fresh fruits and vegetables. Winter comes after fall. It‘s white. It often snows. The snow flakes are clean and white.

I like all the seasons. They are colourful.

教师点评：看到这篇文章，给人耳目一新的感觉。在小作者眼里，四季是彩色的，这是很多同学没有想到的。作者立意新颖，构思巧妙，很有个性。另外文章语言流畅，格式规范。